Monday, November 23, 2009

Lovely Bones ?'s

Susie's father meant that the penguin was inside this snow globe that was like his own little world where no mistakes could happen and nothing could ever go wrong. I don't think Susie considers herself trapped because she can still see Earth and she can find ways to show herself to her family. I don't think Susie thinks her world is perfect because it doesn't have the people that she loves in it and because all that there is in her world is death.

Tuesday, November 10, 2009

10 nouns: California, beach, sand, seashell, Grayhound Bus, Ford Mustang, house, strawberry, town, Oxford.
5 Adjectives: small, sunny, red, blue, white.
3 Adverbs: quickly, carefully, delicately.
2 Conjunctions: and, but.
3 Verbs: walk, leave, carried.
2 Prepositions: on, by.
1 Interjection: Ouch!
2 Pronouns: He, His.

She decided that this summer was going to be great. She was going to leave behind this small town and take a Grayhound Bus to sunny California. Whenever she was on her way she met many different people. She meant a boy named Brian who was going to the same place she was. He was 16 and was going to visit his family. They got to Oxford, California and got a taxi. They split the money between them and than rode together. Whenever she got to her aunts house she saw her uncles red Ford Mustang with a note saying she could take it and have fun. She quickly put away her stuff than carefully drove to the beach. When she got there she laid her towel out and watched the blue waves roll by. Brian showed up and asked her if she wanted to go walk along the beach with him. As they were walking across the white sand she started to pick up all the seashells she could see. There were pink ones and gray ones, and big ones and small ones. While they were walking she stepped on a piece of glass. Ouch! She yelled and Brian looked at it and decided to take the glass out than drive her to the doctor. He delicately took the piece out than carried her to his car and drove her to the hospital.

Friday, September 18, 2009

Shakespeare language

Kinslie thou art a carl. Thee should become a crow-keeper, thou art daff in thyself for thou is a daubery. Thou have a bern and thee should defeat so that no one can recognize thee. For if thee is found than thou shall be emboss and endeared for everyone to see.

You should be women, and yet your beards forbid me to interpret that you are so. It means that he thinks they should be women because they act like women but they all
have beards so he knows they aren't.

Monday, September 14, 2009

Quotes to Think About

I think that poet Ralph Waldo Emerson was referring to the fact that it takes different amount of things to make a person mad. Some people might take a lot more than other people to make mad. It just matters which person it is.

Friday, September 11, 2009

9-11 bellringer


I was in second grade and was in Mrs. Mills class. I don't really remember the weeks following 9/11 except that the school talked about it a lot. I remember hearing that nothing this bad had ever really happened in the United States and that the whole country was grieving. I think we will still be remembering 9/11 because it was such a drastic thing and because it showed that you can knock us down but we will get right back up and come at you 10 times harder. I think the terrorists chose to attack America because we are such a strong country and we are very good about holding ourselves together not another country is really like that. I knew one person that lost a mom in 9/11 she was my best friend at the time and when she found out I cried with her. If I wrote a story about 9/11 than I would do it from the people in it point of view and it would be about the terror and the severity of the attack.

Thursday, September 10, 2009

Bellringer

I abhor having to wake up early on Saturdays

Wednesday, September 9, 2009

friendship bellringer

If I had to choose between my morals or my friendship with someone I would choose my morals. I could always find new friends or hope that maybe my friend might understand why i can't do that. I think it's more important to be proud of yourself and to go by your morals than to do what someone wants you to do.

Monday, August 31, 2009

The Lovely Bones

I think that this book is going to be a good book to read. It seems like it has a lot of surprising twists and turns in it. I think the idea that a girl being murdered and than going to heaven and helping her parents and the police find who killed her and where her body is, is a good idea. It shows that even though someone dies they never really leave.

Thursday, August 27, 2009

Why Blog?

I think that we could use blogging so that we could practice on our writing. We could also use it to see other peoples blogs and learn about all the things they write about